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AVOIDING GENDER BIAS

Gender bias has become an important topic for modern writers of all disciplines. However, gender bias can often go unnoticed by the writer, leading to embarrassing feedback from the reader. Bias also tends to distract readers from the topic on which you are trying to inform them. There are three main types of bias of which all writers must be aware:

  • Use of the term "man" to denote all people
  • Use of gender-specific pronouns to refer to people of either gender
  • Subtle stereotyping of gender roles


Use of the term "Man"

Of the three main types of the gender bias, the use of the word man to denote all people is the easiest to correct. The English language has numerous alternatives which include both men and women in their meaning. For example:

Biased: For centuries, men have struggled to find the meaning of life.
Revised: For centuries, people have struggled to find the meaning of life.
Biased: A man who is depressed really needs a friend.
Revised: Someone who is depressed really needs a friend.

Avoiding use of gender-specific pronouns

The following sentence poses a problem to many, if not all, modern writers:

Whenever a professor assigns a paper, he insists on correct grammar.

This sentence assumes that all professors are men, which, as we all know, is an incorrect assumption. But the English language does not have a gender-neutral, singular pronoun for use when referring to people. Certainly, the writer could not write "When a professor assigns a paper, it insists on correct grammar." Often, a writer will then resort to writing

" When a professor assigns a paper, he or she insists on correct grammar" or sometimes "he/she insists on correct grammar."

Using either of these methods might work once, but using them several times over will slow the reading down dramatically and draw attention to their very use. The easiest way to avoid such awkward sentence construction is to convert the noun to its plural form and rewrite the sentence accordingly:

"Whenever professors assign a paper, they insist on correct grammar."

Here are a few more examples:

Biased: A firefighter's dalmation is his best friend.
Revised: Firefighters' dalmations are their best friends.
Biased: A good lawyer will save his best witness for last.
Revised: Good lawyers will save their best witness for last.

Sometimes the very nature of the sentence will not allow for the noun to be changed to its plural form. In this case the sentence can be rewritten to avoid the use of a pronoun entirely.

Biased: Each participant must have his turn to speak.
Revised: Each participant must be allowed to speak.
Biased: When the President of the company speaks, he demands attention.
Revised: When speaking, the President of the company demands attention.

Stereotyping of Gender roles

Although some occupations and hobbies have come to be associated with a certain gender, the association is never absolute. When referring to such occupations, never assume that all individuals in that occupation or hobby are of one gender or the other.

Biased: A nurse must strive to make her patient comfortable.
Revised: A nurse must strive to make the patient comfortable.
Biased: In recent years, women have been spending much less on sewing supplies than they have in the past.
Revised: In recent years, people have been spending much less on sewing supplies than they have in the past.

Always remember to be aware of gender bias when proofreading your paper!


 

 

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