AVOIDING GENDER BIAS
Gender bias has become an important topic for modern writers
of all disciplines. However, gender bias can often go unnoticed
by the writer, leading to embarrassing feedback from the reader.
Bias also tends to distract readers from the topic on which you
are trying to inform them. There are three main types of bias
of which all writers must be aware:
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Use of the term "man" to denote all
people
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Use of gender-specific pronouns to refer to
people of either gender
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Subtle stereotyping of gender roles
Use of the term "Man"
Of the three main types of the gender bias, the use of the word
man to denote all people is the easiest to correct. The English
language has numerous alternatives which include both men and
women in their meaning. For example:
Biased: For centuries, men have struggled to
find the meaning of life.
Revised: For centuries, people have struggled
to find the meaning of life.
Biased: A man who is depressed really needs a
friend.
Revised: Someone who is depressed really needs
a friend.
Avoiding use of gender-specific pronouns
The following sentence poses a problem to many, if not all,
modern writers:
Whenever a professor assigns a paper, he insists on correct
grammar.
This sentence assumes that all professors are men, which, as
we all know, is an incorrect assumption. But the English language
does not have a gender-neutral, singular pronoun for use when
referring to people. Certainly, the writer could not write "When
a professor assigns a paper, it insists on correct grammar."
Often, a writer will then resort to writing
" When a professor assigns a paper, he or
she insists on correct grammar" or sometimes "he/she
insists on correct grammar."
Using either of these methods might work once, but using them
several times over will slow the reading down dramatically and
draw attention to their very use. The easiest way to avoid such
awkward sentence construction is to convert the noun to its plural
form and rewrite the sentence accordingly:
"Whenever professors assign a paper, they
insist on correct grammar."
Here are a few more examples:
Biased: A firefighter's dalmation is his best
friend.
Revised: Firefighters' dalmations are their best
friends.
Biased: A good lawyer will save his best witness
for last.
Revised: Good lawyers will save their best witness
for last.
Sometimes the very nature of the sentence will not allow for
the noun to be changed to its plural form. In this case the sentence
can be rewritten to avoid the use of a pronoun entirely.
Biased: Each participant must have his turn to
speak.
Revised: Each participant must be allowed to
speak.
Biased: When the President of the company speaks,
he demands attention.
Revised: When speaking, the President of the
company demands attention.
Stereotyping of Gender roles
Although some occupations and hobbies have come to be associated
with a certain gender, the association is never absolute. When
referring to such occupations, never assume that all individuals
in that occupation or hobby are of one gender or the other.
Biased: A nurse must strive to make her patient
comfortable.
Revised: A nurse must strive to make the patient
comfortable.
Biased: In recent years, women have been spending
much less on sewing supplies than they have in the past.
Revised: In recent years, people have been spending
much less on sewing supplies than they have in the past.
Always remember to be aware of gender bias when proofreading
your paper!
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